Chapter Three: Jahrd’s Story: Page 4

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  1. Ok thanks for the recap Meg i appricate it i think what was throwing me off was the scenes switching back and forth like so that i got confused about what was taking place and what was a flashback or something at any rate thanks again ^^

    wonderful colours on this page wow real eye catcher haha those two are almost mirror images of each other with some minor differences Jahrd is more sutle and tends to tip toe around things, Aleassa is more like a Brahman Bull in a pen and certinly more straight to the point lol quite the matching pair those two.

    1. No worries! I knew that telling two stories at once would be troublesome. I tried to advertise what was going on in with Chapter Three in as many places as I could, but it was still bound to cause some confusion. I’m glad I could help! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Thanks! I’m getting better with my new paint set. I think. Great observation about Jahrd and Aleassa. ๐Ÿ™‚

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