Chapter Three: Jamet’s Story: Page 6


  1. Oh, I really like the layout of this page.
    Core plot in the middle, immediate action on the sides. Core plot colored and detailed, immediate action in silhouettes. Two subplots in one page, and they go so well together.
    Derek and his colors. He’ll be important. I like that young fella already.

    And BTW, that “I don’t understand it well”==”It is probably dangerous” assumption seems to be something very basic about Tieke culture.

    I love Jamet’s story already 🙂

    1. Fantastic! I had a ton of fun plotting this page, I won’t lie. I love when I get to be creative with more than just the plot. I’m glad it was well-received. 😀

      It is indeed a very common theme with them. It’s a recipe for trouble and yet they don’t seem to grasp the pattern…

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